I was never bored by this story! It told me all the things I needed to know about the fairies, and it didn't waste any words. Well done Lily! I do wish that I knew some more about the fairies, like if they wore dresses or trousers, or what colour hair they each had. And what sort of tree was the tree house built in? was it an oak tree or a bendy willow tree? I would love to know that. Did the tree house have a door? what colour was it? Did the fairies like living in the tree house, or did they wish they lived in a fairy castle? well done Lily: which is a name I love.
I was never bored by this story! It told me all the things I needed to know about the fairies, and it didn't waste any words. Well done Lily! I do wish that I knew some more about the fairies, like if they wore dresses or trousers, or what colour hair they each had. And what sort of tree was the tree house built in? was it an oak tree or a bendy willow tree? I would love to know that. Did the tree house have a door? what colour was it? Did the fairies like living in the tree house, or did they wish they lived in a fairy castle? well done Lily: which is a name I love.
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